Neoseeker : Blogs : Daydreaming : An attempt to make a riddle

Daydreaming's blog

An attempt to make a riddle

Written on Mar 4, 09 7:52 pm | Other 18 comments | 0 | 0 | tags: riddle
    Alright, I tried to make a riddle, but it came out looking more like a poem.
    I just want to see how good I am at making this sort of stuff.

    Well? Think you can answer my riddle? ~_^



    Who are you?
    You, who is within my sight, but never within reach.
    You, who is always there, even when you can't be seen.
    Who are you?
    You, who mock me from a distance I will never overcome.
    You, who is of the future but can only be seen in the past.
    ...you, who seem nothing more than dust in the wind.
Share on Facebook Digg It Grep It

Comments

  • 1 thumbs!
    Neo McKnight since Jan 2009 | Mar 4, 09
    Your Shadow.
  • 0 thumbs!
    Daydreaming since Nov 2007 | Mar 4, 09
    Good guess, I haven't thought of that, but no.
  • 1 thumbs!
    Neo McKnight since Jan 2009 | Mar 4, 09
    It makes sense...hmmm.....the true understanding of the human soul perhaps?
  • 0 thumbs!
    Daydreaming since Nov 2007 | Mar 4, 09
    Don't give it too much thought. ;-;

    "who is always within my sight, but never within reach."

    You can poke your shadow. =D
  • 1 thumbs!
    Neo McKnight since Jan 2009 | Mar 4, 09
    im my case it would be my toes..i sut at stretching, lol....Perhaps...The cycle of Death and Rebirth?
  • 0 thumbs!
    Daydreaming since Nov 2007 | Mar 4, 09
    Death can never be within reach? You can die pretty easily.
    The cycle of Death and Rebirth isn't "nothing more than dust in the wind."
  • 0 thumbs!
    Daydreaming since Nov 2007 | Mar 4, 09
    btw, it's nothing concerning religion or beliefs.
  • 0 thumbs!
    kik36 since Apr 2007 | Mar 4, 09
    Is it the wind?

    Edit......errr nvm, just caught the last sentence. I would guess time.
    Last edited by kik36 :: Mar 4, 09
  • 0 thumbs!
    RHJ44 since Mar 2009 | Mar 4, 09
    im guessing it's a picture of yourself?
  • 0 thumbs!
    RHJ44 since Mar 2009 | Mar 4, 09
    ....because time cannot mock you
  • 3 thumbs!
    tekmosis since Jul 2006 | Mar 4, 09
    ninja kitty

    quote
    You, who is within my sight, but never within reach.
    ninja kitty sits on the fence, you can't touch

    quote
    You, who is always there, even when you can't be seen.
    ninja kitty watches you from the shadows

    quote
    You, who mock me from a distance I will never overcome.
    ninja kitty mocks you, infidel!

    quote
    You, who is of the future but can only be seen in the past.
    quote
    ...you, who seem nothing more than dust in the wind.
    you never really see ninja kitty for ninja kitty is a ninja
    • 2 thumbs!
      tekmosis since Jul 2006 | Mar 4, 09
      How dare you give me and ninja kitty a thumbs down! I hope you sleep with your eyes open because ninja kitty will find you.
      • -1 thumbs!
        kik36 since Apr 2007 | Mar 4, 09
        I would have thought Ninja Monkey from you.
  • 0 thumbs!
    Daydreaming since Nov 2007 | Mar 4, 09
    lol @ ninja kitty.

    But, no, you guys are all wrong.
    *fails*
  • 2 thumbs!
    draconic_girl since Apr 2006 | Mar 5, 09
    Star light? You can see it but you can't get it. I honestly believe there is always light even in the darkest places. Stars are in space. They're light is very old and was shone many millenia before ever seeing it and yada yada. So is it Star light?
  • 0 thumbs!
    Daydreaming since Nov 2007 | Mar 5, 09
    Damn, you got it right. ;-;
  • 0 thumbs!
    Euphoric since Feb 2008 | Mar 5, 09
    The horizon?
  • 0 thumbs!
    Daydreaming since Nov 2007 | Mar 7, 09
    No, draconic_girl got it right. It's a star.
Add your comment:
Name *:  Members, please LOGIN before posting
Email:
Live user
verification *:
Enter the letters you see in the image (without spaces)
Comment *:
(1.5418/d/aeon)